Cork, your fiction writing is excellent! Fiction is so different in temperament from non-fiction, as the characters MUST draw the reader in immediately, in order to keep them reading. I liked these lines:
"It was as if Robert was two different people that could not coexist in the same place at the same time - The loving husband at home and the businessman who shut her out of that part of his life. That made her even more uneasy than the rumors.
And his angry response had scared her. For a moment, she glimpsed a raging monster standing before her who, just as quickly, reverted back to the Prince Charming who had won her heart. Which one was real? It had been unsettling, but she tucked it away as stress."
Wow....if that is not a warning, I don't know what is? Timeless and a good lesson.
Excellent read as always. The plot is certainly thickening.
Cork, your fiction writing is excellent! Fiction is so different in temperament from non-fiction, as the characters MUST draw the reader in immediately, in order to keep them reading. I liked these lines:
"It was as if Robert was two different people that could not coexist in the same place at the same time - The loving husband at home and the businessman who shut her out of that part of his life. That made her even more uneasy than the rumors.
And his angry response had scared her. For a moment, she glimpsed a raging monster standing before her who, just as quickly, reverted back to the Prince Charming who had won her heart. Which one was real? It had been unsettling, but she tucked it away as stress."
Wow....if that is not a warning, I don't know what is? Timeless and a good lesson.
Great job, Cork! Blessings to you, Wendy